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February 3, 2013 at 7:11 am #831949
casino2012MemberGood Afternoon,
I am also quite new to this, but one thing i would probably say is to get rid of the video with the computer voice, I could imagine most would find it quite annoying. But like i say i am also new to this so i am probabley not the best person to give you advice.
All the best
February 3, 2013 at 3:13 pm #831950
pvrc22MemberWell actually that is a digital actor and not a video. It should motivate and indulge the visitors to discover the site far and wide.
@walsh2326 249635 wrote:
Good Afternoon,
I am also quite new to this, but one thing i would probably say is to get rid of the video with the computer voice, I could imagine most would find it quite annoying. But like i say i am also new to this so i am probabley not the best person to give you advice.
All the best
February 3, 2013 at 3:35 pm #831951
wbprofitsMemberIt motivated me to leave the site !
I think using a free domain and a free hosting will hurt you.
others will pitch in thier thoughts also
February 3, 2013 at 3:42 pm #831953
Darpan.bMemberI agree with Wals2326 and GamblinShares. You should remove the video. It is some good technology, but it is annoying to hear if you visit a website.
You should consider to buy a domain and hosting.
For the layout I would make the fontsize smaller. Also consider to make the normal text white and the titles in a other color maybe red. The dark blue is harder to read on a black background.
Good luck.
February 3, 2013 at 8:49 pm #831956
seedingltdMemberYes, please lose the video. It is just annoying like the others have said. I really can not help more than what is listed above. boljoro has summed up what you need to do. When you complete these tasks I will review your site again and give my opinions
. Good luck and welcome.February 3, 2013 at 9:56 pm #831959
pvrc22MemberYes, I will make the necessary adjustments and will let you know when to review my site again. Thank you all for your valuable suggestions.
@boljoro 249640 wrote:
I agree with Wals2326 and GamblinShares. You should remove the video. It is some good technology, but it is annoying to hear if you visit a website.
You should consider to buy a domain and hosting.
For the layout I would make the fontsize smaller. Also consider to make the normal text white and the titles in a other color maybe red. The dark blue is harder to read on a black background.
Good luck.
February 3, 2013 at 11:38 pm #831960
pvrc22MemberI just finished updating my site by following your advice:
1) I have changed the normal text from blue to white
2) The titles from white to red and some to yellow
3) I changed the position & appearance of the digital actor from body to only the head and reduced her words to a simple “Hello, and welcome to Play2Win Casino!” (please let me know if it is still annoying? If it is then I will remove it)For the domain & hosting I will just have to wait for the moment.
Please review

Thanks
February 4, 2013 at 1:18 am #831961
Darpan.bMemberIt is much better now.
In my opinion you should completely remove the digital actor/voice. It doesn’t bring anything more to your website. I wouldn’t place any audio at all on a website. It is something nice to create and show but it is anoying if you are listening to music for example. But also if you visit the website more then once and have to listen to the same sentence over and over again.
Some more tips:
-The step by step guide is still in blue text. Change it, blue on black doesn’t match.
-Make all images transpirant. For example the language flags, social buttons on the bottom, etc. And the worst is the loyalty pays image.
-5px white border on top? Is that on purpose?
-play2win logo on the left top doesn’t fit. Remove it. Or place the full logo on the left or inside the “main black section”. Not half in half outside the black.February 4, 2013 at 1:07 pm #831966
pvrc22MemberThanks a lot Bolijoro for your precious advice.
Well, I just finished updating again my site:1) Removed the digital actor/voice.
2) Changed the step by step guide from blue text to white text.
3) Made all images transpirant.
4) Placed the full logo on the left inside the “main black section”.
5) 5px white border on top is not on purpose but unfortunately to get rid of it I need to purchase a domain & hosting and for the moment I can’t.Please check if I missed something

Thanks again
February 4, 2013 at 2:34 pm #831967
Darpan.bMemberIt looks much better now.
One more thing. You changed the “loyalty pays” image, but you took a other image and resized it to big. In my opinion you can better have a small image then a big one where you can count pixels.
Good luck with you website.
February 4, 2013 at 2:47 pm #831968
casino2012MemberCan i just add also, if it was me i would try lose some of the text on the main page. Write smaller but useful paragraphs. I just i could also see people getting very bored reading through it all. Others might not agree, but just abit of advice how i see it. Glad to see you removed the annoying voice
Looking alot betterFebruary 4, 2013 at 3:13 pm #831972
pvrc22MemberYes,
I now fixed the loyalty pays image.
@boljoro 249661 wrote:
It looks much better now.
One more thing. You changed the “loyalty pays” image, but you took a other image and resized it to big. In my opinion you can better have a small image then a big one where you can count pixels.
Good luck with you website.
February 4, 2013 at 3:16 pm #831973
pvrc22MemberThanks Walsh,
I am looking forward to optimize the paragraphs on the main page.
@walsh2326 249662 wrote:
Can i just add also, if it was me i would try lose some of the text on the main page. Write smaller but useful paragraphs. I just i could also see people getting very bored reading through it all. Others might not agree, but just abit of advice how i see it. Glad to see you removed the annoying voice
Looking alot betterFebruary 4, 2013 at 9:00 pm #831977
seedingltdMemberLooking much better madog! May I suggest changing the black background to a very dark grey instead? You did a lot of work in a short time and I see you are open to listen and grow with us. That makes me happy. Continue working and I will help review your sites anytime. Welcome again to the best casino affiliate community on the planet.
February 6, 2013 at 2:26 pm #832012
pvrc22MemberThanks for the suggestion Muffincrumbs. I made some minor changes at the moment like adding some video review and also added some fresh news on my blog about play2wincasino new i-slot game Midway Madness. I would like everyone to look at my blog here: NEW i-slot Game release – Midway Madness launch!
Good day.
Paolo
@muffincrumbs 249672 wrote:
Looking much better madog! May I suggest changing the black background to a very dark grey instead? You did a lot of work in a short time and I see you are open to listen and grow with us. That makes me happy. Continue working and I will help review your sites anytime. Welcome again to the best casino affiliate community on the planet.
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