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1. the website layout is fine but i’ld check the spelling everywhere though (comeo casino?)
2. remove cpays properties (that’s just my opinion)
3. provide unique/personal reviews. or pretend to be. content is king. not much use just listing the games, depositing methods and stuff. i mean if you would go around in listing the depositing methods in order to provide information, not just to cram the page for keywords/text, then some structure would be needed. i did a lot of that and now working with the humongous task of rewriting 500 pages of text…ugh
peace
webin wrote:What do you think of website http://www.onlinexcasinos.com ?
the website is focused to online casinos.It’s quite a good site – and seems to cover a range of items from paymetn options to casino reviews to news.
However the only slight negative I have is that the wording of the English is not quite right …. for example :
Quote:The different methods to keep the security are by the full support of Responsible Gambling. The NORC Diagnostic Screen helps screen gambling disorder. This casino is not open to under 18 individual and it is to be noticed by the parents or guardian.This paragraph was in the RubyFortune preview and while I understand what you are trying to say – there are a least 5-6 grammatical errors there that mean it does not read right.
The other things that I notice are :
– That every review is “text only” – some graphics might help
– That every review is “nice” – nothing is good or badBasically if you’re trying to get someone to commit to join up – then there does need to be an element of sales pitch and recommendation in your reviews.
In going through your site I had no idea which casino / payment option / or game you thought was best … there was no opinions … and no real push to get a click.
Are you hoping that the affiliate banners will get a click? That’s not as common as casino’s would like to think because people are becoming immune to banner advertising.
Scores :
– 7/10 for site layout
– 7/10 for reviews
– 7/10 for overall content
– 2/10 for sales potentialHello very thank both
I don’t understand this :
“””provide unique/personal reviews. or pretend to be. content is king.”””I provide unique review I have checked some pages with copyscape ( but I have seen three or 5 words copied ). Can you give the pages ? are review of casinopartners ?
I’ll correct it and after I’ll receive an other feedback.
Best Regards
What i meant is that you need to review the properties as opposed to listing what is available. Listings best work in tables, if you are writing paragraph text then you should be pointing out what’s good, bad, etc. Provide your opinions on things…that’s just my humble opinion
