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  • #816671
    Ivo van Beek
    Member

    Hey byebyebaby!

    I checked your 3 sites and they look very good! I think you are off to a great start, you have a good amount of content and casinos. H4G is probably the one I like the most, the colors you chose are very user friendly plus you have a lot of information in it! If you are planning on offering Live Dealer Casinos in the future we would love to be a part of this!!

    The only thing I would work on maybe are the titles on your sites, maybe the text can be bigger and more lively, but thats just my opinion!! Best of luck to you!!:laugh:

    #816683
    winner.com
    Member

    I took a look at “heaven4casinos”

    Here are a couple of things I would change
    1) I don’t know about you but do you think anyone is typing in “heaven4casinos” , you have that in your title and (I think it’s) an h1 tag – try to come up with a good keyword string and replace it with your url name (eg. top 10 online casinos, online casino top bonuses) If you want put you url name at the end
    2) onine should be online in your title tag
    3) I like the layout but, for me, the colours are terrible – pumpkin and brown – I don’t know if you can switch them but if you can do it

    4) at the bottom right it looks like a paragraph but google might see it as keyword stuffing
    5) I know it’s probably a server issue but your site loads very slowly

    #816697
    MissM
    Member

    @gabriel_LCP 228888 wrote:

    Hey byebyebaby!

    I checked your 3 sites and they look very good! I think you are off to a great start, you have a good amount of content and casinos. H4G is probably the one I like the most, the colors you chose are very user friendly plus you have a lot of information in it! If you are planning on offering Live Dealer Casinos in the future we would love to be a part of this!!

    The only thing I would work on maybe are the titles on your sites, maybe the text can be bigger and more lively, but thats just my opinion!! Best of luck to you!!:laugh:

    Thanks a lot for your comment. I will see about the titles, you do mean the posts titles I think?

    #816698
    MissM
    Member

    @Shotgunpete 228904 wrote:

    I took a look at “heaven4casinos”

    Here are a couple of things I would change
    1) I don’t know about you but do you think anyone is typing in “heaven4casinos” , you have that in your title and (I think it’s) an h1 tag – try to come up with a good keyword string and replace it with your url name (eg. top 10 online casinos, online casino top bonuses) If you want put you url name at the end
    2) onine should be online in your title tag
    3) I like the layout but, for me, the colours are terrible – pumpkin and brown – I don’t know if you can switch them but if you can do it

    4) at the bottom right it looks like a paragraph but google might see it as keyword stuffing
    5) I know it’s probably a server issue but your site loads very slowly

    Thanks for your input, it really helps. I will change the title. Also the text in the right corner is the footer, is this a problem like this? I know the website loads slow, don’t know how I can fix this?
    Last the colors, I like them but I can also see that people might hate it. Will have to reconsider that, for now I’ll leave it I think. :laugh:

    #816706
    winner.com
    Member

    Server and speed issues – if it’s your server you have to talk to them

    but you might want to check
    1) images- who hosts them – if you do, make sure the are the right size- not squeezing a 250 in to a 100*100
    2) do you have a hidden tracker -it might slow you down

    googles new thing is speed, loading quickness – if you load slow you might get hurt

    #816714
    Ivo van Beek
    Member

    @byebyebaby 228927 wrote:

    Thanks a lot for your comment. I will see about the titles, you do mean the posts titles I think?

    Hi there!

    Yeah I meant the titles of your sites, for example the heaven4casinos title or the H4G title, etc!

    #816894
    brettigartua
    Member

    Hi byebyebaby,

    About the site heaven4gambling.com have good design and content, but you need to improve your title, on this moment you have only “H4G”, is better you change for “Heaven4Gambling” and with some more text in the title related with your site.

    About the site heaven4gamblers.com, need to have a better design.

    About the site heaven4casinos.com, have good design and content, but you have one error on the title “all onine casino news”. And in your section of Casinos A-Z you need to remove all casinos of software Vegas Technology because they not accept new players, and I not found too the OK Online Casino listed.

    Cheers,

    #816925
    MissM
    Member

    What do you mean about gamblers with the design? What do you think is wrong with it?

    Also what do you mean with the OK Casino list?

    Thanks for the responds, Ralph

    @the-millionaire 229231 wrote:

    Hi byebyebaby,

    About the site heaven4gambling.com have good design and content, but you need to improve your title, on this moment you have only “H4G”, is better you change for “Heaven4Gambling” and with some more text in the title related with your site.

    About the site heaven4gamblers.com, need to have a better design.

    About the site heaven4casinos.com, have good design and content, but you have one error on the title “all onine casino news”. And in your section of Casinos A-Z you need to remove all casinos of software Vegas Technology because they not accept new players, and I not found too the OK Online Casino listed.

    Cheers,

    #816948
    brettigartua
    Member

    @byebyebaby 229271 wrote:

    What do you mean about gamblers with the design? What do you think is wrong with it?

    Also what do you mean with the OK Casino list?

    Thanks for the responds, Ralph

    About the gamblers, could have better design and structure to improve the conversions.

    About the OK Casino List, I not found the “OK Online Casino” (software Ever88 Entertainment) listed on your section Casinos A-Z guide.

    You need also to update your casino guide list, because some casinos not accept new players (all casinos with software Vegas Tecnology = closed ).

    Cheers,

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