Hi,
I like the logo and the idea behind your site. However, I think there are a few things you could do to increase the conversion of your site.
Instead of the opening title being ‘welcome to the VIP Card Club’, maybe you could have a more grabbing title with benefits to why the visitor should sign up to your site.
For example: ‘Enjoy bigger bonuses, more rewards and huge cash prizes – Join the VIP Card Club for FREE!‘
I would also add some images to liven up your page. You could keep the VIP Club theme by adding some classy images that will give the visitor the impression that they are joining an exclusive club.
That’s just a few of my thoughts. I hope they are helpful.