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I thought those were both pretty cool. :thumbsup:
Thank you Engineer. Some kinks should have them sorted out soon. greek39
very nice Greek!
Thanks for your replies, looks like I am heading in the right direction. greek39
Ok … the harsh review …
FIRST ADVERT
Too long – you spent 70 seconds not saying much.
Too eighties – the musicAnd the message is garbled … what exactly is it your selling ?
– a new device?
– special unique website content ?Lots of generic promises – with plenty of pretty graphics of fancy buildings and equipment. But what is it ?
Visually interesting. Commercially poor. IMO.
SECOND ADVERT
Better – shorter – to the point – listing what you offer on your site.I thinnk you’d be better advised to keep the logo or website address imposed on the bottom right hand corner though – because it’s hardly a catchy URL with the 7 at the end.
Onlinegambling 7.com
Overall the first advert was technically perfect – but fundamentally flawed in that it didn’t really sell but spent a lot of time showing fancy graphics.
:sarcasm:The second advert was much better – asking questions that newbies might (or might not) ask – and demonstrating why they should visit.
:clapper:Overall I found both adverts very creative! However, I felt the first was better. The brain was a bit too clinical looking for me, but the concept was excellent
Well I thank you for the feedback! I always love TheGooner’s responses, straight to the point. I do agree a little tweaking here and there perhaps. This is just a test run, I have 8 others. The music can be changed, perhaps to “werewolves of London” or somthing of that nature.
The message can be inhanced I tried to aviod directly linking it to gambling images.
greek39
I thought the 2nd one was much better, especially for newbies. I liked the idea of two people typing online to each other (at least that’s how I took it). I think too, that the URL should be constant at the bottom.
Really nice work!
well thank you ewhitaker I appreciate your kind remarks. greek39
2nd one is better
but…
If you took just the last 5 seconds of the 1st one, it would be best of all
just the logo and spinning dice would arouse someones curiousity and make them want to visit the site, no need for any description of your site content
I agree Nick777 perhaps a combination of both. I really like the last 5 seconds of the first one. That’s what I was thinking a combining the two. I am enjoying the feedback greatly. This will but me in a position for something very revolutionary.
I can do voice overs and have access to the green screen. How effective is it? I would like to do one 888 hosted on a private network in the U.S. But maybe I will save this one idea for Miami. greek39
I like the concept and the images, but I agree with the gooner, the first is too long and vague.
Download time is a factor IMO, I am on a very fast connection and it still took a while to DL the first one, not so long for the 2nd one, but still too long in my opinion.
They do look good though, what did you use to create them?
Very Impressive Greekster. I do have a few perspectives on it though. I think many decent gambling portals offer the info you were using to sell people on your website. Not that your selling points are bad or anything, I would just incorporate a few questions in the second video like “Do you want exclusive bonuses” or “”Do you want exclusive gambling tips by a Professional Gambler Then join our newsletter” Thats just an example but something to put your site above the rest and make your visitors feel like your site is not the adverage portal and they will feel like they are part of something special. People definitely like to feel special now don’t they. Also, it seems like your videos are more less reasons to visit the site but if they are watching it they must already be there. So I would probably be more inclined to incorporate the same ideas and selling points, but from a navigational perspective. Visit XXhttp://www.brookeburke.com and you will see what I am referring too. Nice work though.
I deeply thank you all for the reviews I will take each one into consideration. I will combine the two into one and make it shorter. Have my domain more prominent, change the music ect… there is more interesting stuff on the way. Again thank you all!!!
greek39 :clapper:
