you can tell hodgeyboy has been in the business over 60 years!
I totally agree with him, there is too much other stuff going on. If its a general landing page you need to send the customer to the message you want them to see from a specific banner.
E.G. Your banner says £100 bonus from clicking this the player wants to land on a page that says £100 bonus click here to get it with some eye candy.
These pages you show here are simply another page to your site with no specific target.
Get your designers to focus on the deal or whatever your promotion is and throw that in the faces of the visitors.Look to take away most if not all of that navigation as well. As my doctor said to me once, you dont want too many unwanted leaks now!