June 17, 2007 at 11:45 am
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mmm … yep I see. A good idea in principle and certainly one that your writing has the skills to achieve.
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I also think that I can see there is a good potential crossover between sports betting and poker playing as both lines of gambling are reliant on spotting a good opportunity to make a bet – rather than betting on anything.
But remember that writing for the web (and for internet players) tends to be quite different than writing for a newspaper or journal.
It needs to be a little snappier – and probably a little more positive – as it stands I’m not sure just how it converts the novice or entices the experienced player to read further.
Good luck with it.
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