Thanks for the input.
As far as aim goes, I’m trying to put a new perspective on “why?” I guess I’m just tired of reading the same old cliche of “why sportsbetting” that all seem to say the same thing all over the web.
Trying to step away from the crowd I guess 
– I do admit, I was very keyword orientated when writing up this draft. It probably did get in the way of the literary aspects of it quite a bit.
VERY WELL NOTED.. Thanks Again