Ok … the harsh review …
FIRST ADVERT
Too long – you spent 70 seconds not saying much.
Too eighties – the music
And the message is garbled … what exactly is it your selling ?
– a new device?
– special unique website content ?
Lots of generic promises – with plenty of pretty graphics of fancy buildings and equipment. But what is it ?
Visually interesting. Commercially poor. IMO.
SECOND ADVERT
Better – shorter – to the point – listing what you offer on your site.
I thinnk you’d be better advised to keep the logo or website address imposed on the bottom right hand corner though – because it’s hardly a catchy URL with the 7 at the end.
Onlinegambling 7.com
Overall the first advert was technically perfect – but fundamentally flawed in that it didn’t really sell but spent a lot of time showing fancy graphics.
:sarcasm:
The second advert was much better – asking questions that newbies might (or might not) ask – and demonstrating why they should visit.
:clapper: