I was just telling dh that it is amazing that I myself read a book nearly every week, but rarely read anything longer than a paragraph online. So in that respect, I am in agreement with the above…
Besides! You have original text there! Make use of it! I’d suggest breaking it down, adding more pages.. or more places for links 
Love the ratings! But I must say if I was trying to make sure I saw all of your page, I wouldn’t have seen them.. It took me a few months to find these forums all the way down here! I am deffinately one of the laziest internet users LOL…
In another thread about the way a persons eyes travel on the screen.. it states that the first place a person looks on a site is the upper left hand corner.. Don’t ask me why, because I didn’t read all of that either 
but .. I can tell ya, oddly enough, I’ve been paying attention since, and for me thats true. So that might be a good spot for some of your featured offers 
I noticed that you have aLOT of links down at the bottom of the page, a quick find menu bar on either side of the page, with some of those links in it might get more ppl clicking, or acrossed the top, wherever.. Or maybe if you do get some of that text spread to other pages.. the bottom wont be so far away, and ppl will get down there.
Lastly, grammar.. I know its silly, but on an info page such as yours, I have no faith in what you say, if you can’t say it correctly. No offence, I am the queen of typo’s and one of the laziest typists out there.. but you have alot of good stuff there, just need to get someone to proofread it