I was looking at the one you didn’t want a review on but nontheless
your title should be like a headline in a newspaper article – it’s not spammy to put words that your website is about
but, I think, it’s the same thing
Title- Best Slots Bonus UK Online Casino Sites Bonus UK Bonus Slots (or something Like that)
same thing with your alt tag – should be the same as your keyword phrase (at least it’s worked for me)
I also like the layout of the other one – this one look a little flat – can’t you put a big image of a slot machine in the background – the burgundy isn’t working for me
The top menu is a little sloppy and if you add more pages it will just get worse – side menu is better – plus what happens if a USA person hits your sites – they have no where to go
plus, as an aside, you should link a couple of pages to your other sites – it can’t hurt unless you abuse it