Hi,
looks good. Needs another pass or two to correct a few typos. run the text through a spell checker. here’s a few I saw right off.
sence (since) vist (visit?) dont (don’t) confedints (confidence)
registertion (registration) might want to fix that witch (which) to, that’s the halloween witch not the choice.
I can’t spell anymore so I use google for my spell checker now for single words anyway. I just pop the way I think it should be spelled in the toolbar search box and most of the times it says “did you mean?” and I say yes, thank you Google!