I think your off to a decent start but would change a few things.
Your exactly right that you need to be showing “free Poker Money Offers” as that’s exactly what any visitor is looking for, this isn’t the kind of site people will stay at and read content although content is obviously a must.
If it were me i would use a table to lay out the best 5 free money offers and those should include deals such as $10 free no deposit from places such as Victor Chandler. (europartners may hook up you also if you ask nicely)
An example of the table i mean is on this unfinished effort of mine http://holdemnolimit.co.uk/ not my template though.
It’s much easier on the eye to have a simple ranking system for people to compare the bonuses and then read a review, sell them the bonus or free money in a well laid out review and end up with a simpe call to action in a text link for them to go get it.
This kind of site attracts free loaders so will never really make a lot of money, that said there is a need for it so your best shot with this is to show them the free money deals, when they have some cash or get a job they may turn in to real money players for you.
Good luck