greek39 wrote:
Don’t really want to elaborate but would you consider having a look. As TheGooner suggested I may be keyword stacking.
Greek, in my review of that portion what I meant there is that the whole paragraph is obviously designed to impress search engines by matching your target keywords – rather than being informative to visitors.
The use of the language in that top paragraph is NOT NATURAL and certainly does nothing to greet visitors or explain what your site offers. If you want to keep it there then try harder to make it useful to humans too.
This is your prime real estate to make an immediate impression on the humans that visit and instead you’ve dedicated it to the search engines. Great for search engines – but it’s not going to help conversions is it?