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Reply To: Need someone to critique my new site please.

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Well first I will say it looks great. I like sites that have content stand out they often better perform in the SE than sites with a bunch of internal and external links.

I encountered some gramical errors and spelling mistakes on your front page. As follows according to the English Language Dictionary:

adavantages> advantages

experiance> experience

gamlbing> gambling

waisting> wasting

bonuse> bonus

Comped> compted

Not sure about the following:

videopoker or video poker

highroller or high roller

mcdonalds or Mc Donalds’s, McDonald’s

Your browser support is good only 13 conflicts which is average. There is one that conflicts with every browser on line 21.

I could not find a page title in you source. The page decription really lacks so do the keywords, this is your home page, the most important page. But that’s all the time I have. In general I like it, and once optimized it will pass many competitors. greek39